The Love he showed towards you girl,
Was limitless and you know that girl.
He gave you smile and wiped off your tears,
Hey girl, he even took out your fear.
He did whatever he could for you,
He loved you girl and waited for you.
You even didn’t bother to think of him,
But only when mattered, you did use him.
He still kept smiling and waited for you,
With a hope that someday even you’ll come through.
He did know you were on with someone,
But great the boy, still wished luck for that one.
Love for you wasn’t more than a game,
Hey girl you should be down, full of shame.
Love never meant for you anytime,
The boy still wishing you to be happy all-time.
Boy is wasting still his time,
Still hoping you are back anytime.
Hey girl, never say you loved someone,
Coz a loving heart might never this much hurt someone.
A Poem summarizing real life experience.
P.S : This poem is not meant to hurt anyone, so hope you take it only as a poem and not as a taunt or something else....
P.S : This poem is not meant to hurt anyone, so hope you take it only as a poem and not as a taunt or something else....
Hey its a nice one....and no way..poem doesn't hurt anyone....You spoke your heart out loudly and that makes it a nice poem.....
ردحذفkeep writing...good attempt :)
Thank You Hemant. I mentioned my P.S. because I know this poem is definitely gonna hurt atleast one of my reader... :)
ردحذفI feel bad for the boy as I feel he has so much love in his heart and there must be someone out there, who would value and treasure it. Poem is beautiful...
ردحذفSaru
I don't know what to reply to you Saru with respect to that boy, but I hope your words come true...
ردحذفanyways, thanks for sharing your valuable comments... :)
the silly boy....
ردحذفhahaha, I did expect this from You bro... :)
ردحذفlol...likes the P.S. :)....
ردحذفboy still wasting his time??? i agree he is silly :p
nice poem...
Hello.
ردحذفIt's sad when you dedicate yourself to loving someone who doesn't see you in that way and who doesn't return the feelings. Better to move on to someone who will be more appreciative and who will treasure this boy's heart...for it truly is full of love for the right person.
Sad & touching.
Thanks for sharing.
My latest poem: Thief In The Night
Hahaha Thanks SUB
ردحذفThank You Sir, both, for your comments as well as for the Link... :)
ردحذفExpressions n imagery u have created is beautiful.
ردحذفvery strong emotions reflected..
Lovely read !!
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Very touching. Men or Women, the feeling is mutual. It is really hurtful when ones love is not returned or appreciated. Or taken for granted. I know how painful it can be. The wound might heal, but the scar will be there forever!!
ردحذفVery well said Ranj...
ردحذفThanks for your valuable comments...
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