My Friend Andy has started a challenge to construct a poem, written by different Bloggers.
I am entering the challenge too and you may
follow the Lover’s Cove Challenge post from here.
I am the #17 to add lines to L'Aussie Denise
My Line: For my words are the cry of my
eyes and the await of my heart
You may enter your lines in here too… :)
All The Best #18
All The Best #18
Dear Venkateswaran,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Lovers' Cove!
Thank you for making an attempt at the challenge. I like your line.
The only thing is...it should continue on in thought from L'Aussie Denise who is the last person in the Linky (not Priyanka). Also, I couldn't add your post to the Linky because your backlink reference is incorrect.
Here is what I suggest you do, change the backlink to http://apd-loverscove.blogspot.com or http://apd-loverscove.blogspot.com/2012/05/lovers-cove-challenge-1-05262012.html (do not use .in - the Linky won't recognize it)
Try to rewrite your line based on L'Aussie Denise's entry. This is what she wrote: "My
perpetual allegiance belongs to you and no other. Believe my words of truth"
Then return to Lovers' Cove ASAP & try to reenter your post in the Linky so you will be at link #17, after L'Aussie Denise. It's bedtime for me, but I'll wait up for a bit in case you need my help.
Dear Venkateswaran,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your patience and for resubmitting your post to the Lovers' Cove Challenge. You actually dropped down to #20, but your modified line flows nicely from Suzy Que who got in before you. Your line is very meaningful and I truly appreciate your effort.
Thank you for giving the Lovers' Cove Challenge a try. Do click on a few of the other links...you never know what you'll discover!
Thanks again & see you soon! (come join Blog Hop Saturday! #2. Linky will open later this evening)
Lovers' Cove
I am glad that my line flows with
ReplyDeleteSuzy Que's line.
Thanks for arranging such a unique and great challenge... :)
That was so touching !
ReplyDeleteBeautifully added! :)
Thanks Simran
ReplyDeleteDear Venkateswaran,
ReplyDeleteI'd like to say a big thank you for taking part in the Lovers' Cove Challenge.
I have posted the final poem...come see!
A Sleeping Flower...
Hi Sir,
ReplyDeleteWoW! I am right away coming there
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Will be glad to hear it from you.... :)