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Thursday, August 25, 2011

O' Death......

10:27 PM Posted by Venkateswaran Ramachandran , , , , , , , 18 comments




O' Death, you don't be so proud,
You should be rather ashamed to be away from the crowd.
I really feel pity for you, O' dear,
Coz you can only hurt and kill the people who fear.

There are people facing you being bold,
In front of them you seen as if sold.
Agreed that those people are few,
But those are enough to make you sue.

I am waiting for you so long,
But don't know why you are away so long.
You can only make people cry in a crowd,
O' Death, you are wicked, so don't be proud.

I am here O' death, waiting for you,
Feeling for you, as you can't get me through.
Take me with you as I am ready to face you,
I know crying for me are only a few.

O' Death, you don't be so proud,
You should be rather ashamed to be away from the crowd.
I really feel pity for you, O' dear,
Coz you can only hurt and kill the people who fear.


We might fear death, but never want to realize that everyone of us have to leave this world, so live to the fullest.
Let Death go through many hurdles before taking you with it.....

Lets face it ... :)
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18 comments:

  1. Its dark and eerier.. yet u have mixed the element of challenging the death.. that adds a positive note to it! very nice!!

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  2. Near Or Far whever Death O'dear you are.. come hav a battle wis us, if u win v will cum wid u or if v cum u get another chance to hav a battle

    nice anna Venkateswaran

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  3. Hey, thank you for passing me the link to your blog, This poem is seriously something :) You are truly good :)

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  4. This poem is amazing! Loved the way you have described Death..
    Nice collection of posts, Venkateswaran..
    Keep it up.

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  5. Nice optimistic and brave thoughts in this poem:)

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  6. @~Serendipity~ : Thanks.

    @yash1229 : Thanks.

    @sajeevkmenon : Thanks.

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  7. I love the concept of this poem, Telling death that it shouldn't be proud...Live life to the fullest...

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  8. wow. someone can define death this much deeply i didn think so. liked ur rhymings. i too try too write poems but m very bad in it. loved it

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  9. This is amazing! You are absolutely right about Death taking people who fear it. We stop living because we fear impending death. Reminds a little about Rowling's Voldemort storyline where he fears death and starts splitting his soul. Read the books or watch the movies if you can't understand the reference.

    I'm surprised to see so many people stop living

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  10. @some unspoken words : Thanks for your compliments.

    @Dial Doctors : I have seen movies and i got what you are referring to. Thanks for your valuable comments

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  11. death isn't bad.....but i like the poem :)...nice one

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