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Friday, August 12, 2011

O' Women.....

12:02 PM Posted by Venkateswaran Ramachandran , , , , , 16 comments




You are the symbol of love,
a symbol of peace and far better than the God above.
You have a lots of role to play,
all of them so important that you can't put them away.

When you love, you are the best,
but ones crossing their limit, you may even put them onto rest.
Indeed God didn't make you in vain,
a women you are, and the best gift a man can gain.

You are the one making a man complete,
You are the part of success coming below his feet.
Patience is what you keep always,
never less you are compared to the almighty in any ways.

I don't understand why you are ignored by men,
neither i know why you are dominated by them,
What ever may be the reason for this way men behave,
You still wish that they shouldn't fall into the grave.

I want to express a lot more, O' Women,
I am out of words, but hope a good work is done by my pen.

You are the symbol of love,
a symbol of peace and far better than the God above.
You have a lots of role to play,
all of them so important that you can't put them away.
 



Thanks to someone special who insisted me to compose this poem... :)

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16 comments:

  1. "You are the symbol of love,
    a symbol of peace and far better than the God above."

    this line shows the passion for every mothers ...nice attempt :)
    keep writing :)

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  2. Patience is what you keep always, lovely...Good poem...

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  3. Thanks to the same someone special!!! Love it!

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  4. superlike.....its very touching...:)

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  5. Now's Dats the Respectable format of love for a women dat can be given

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  6. The poem is as beautiful as its subject-women!!!
    Great job!! :)))

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  7. Hey really great very nice poem.

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  8. Nice Nice..really gd1..!! U write poem2?? Gd re! Liked it :)

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  9. Wow!! Xcellent poem.. :)
    Probably, a best poem i've read in ur blog :)

    Keep writing :)

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